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Mark's avatar

Josiah seems like a good fit for the Syndicate and I'm glad the others thought so too. What will Lucas do when he has to go back to the hustle and bustle of real work after all of these adventures I wonder. Real life seems like a drag compared to jet setting and hanging out with all of these famous people. The narrator was good, kept up the characters well. Good chapter, thank you for sharing.

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Rand Leeb-du Toit's avatar

Thanks Mark. I assure you things only get more interesting for Lucas in the sequel!

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Nikki Spark's avatar

The Syndicate together! Glad everyone made it. They all have such interesting childhood idiosyncracies. I was never that interesting. And the narrator continues to separate each character with their own voice. It would be interesting to watch that yoga class as well! Oh to be a fly on the wall of Lucas's adventures. Nicely done!

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Rand Leeb-du Toit's avatar

Thanks Nikki. One more chapter to go!

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