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Kim Calvin's avatar

What a fun chapter! I think Olivia is a hoot, and I hope we see more of her in future chapters. I also love the Dr Who reference!

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Kim Calvin's avatar

What a fun chapter! I think Olivia is a hoot, and I hope we see more of her in future chapters. I also love the Dr Who reference!

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Angela Boyko's avatar

Oh my gosh it's Jeff Probst! I love all the modern world touches dropped into this story, which really reminds me of a far off land in the 20s and 30s, style-wise. It feels like Out of Africa but really, it's Malaysia with a swanky resort. With Jeff Probst in the area, inviting new acquaintances to parties. Will they survive meeting his celebrity friends?

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Jill's avatar

There's an immediate sense of engagement with the different character voices in this chapter. Jeff's charisma and interest in Olivia's aspirations are endearing, making him not just a TV presenter but a genuine person. I can't wait to know more about this top-secret camping expedition!

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