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Kim Calvin's avatar

Wow! This really is Survivor, Real Life Season! I will laugh and laugh if they go around a corner on the beach, to find a reward challenge set up. Maybe the other tribe will invade their camp? Anything can happen in this book!

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Angela Boyko's avatar

What a chapter full of drama! The descriptions are so well written, I could almost feel the cold rain soaking me as I wade in a cold ocean to the boat. Loved that ever sensible Sandra stepped forward to render first aid.

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Angela Boyko's avatar

What a chapter full of drama! The descriptions are so well written, I could almost feel the cold rain soaking me as I wade in a cold ocrean to the boat. Loved that ever sendible Sandra stepped forward to render first aid.

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Mark's avatar

Very interesting chapter. The narrator did a good job switching between the characters seamlessly. I felt transported to their boat and island shelter. I hope Lucas ends up okay, and they are not stranded long. It's quite alarming to be on a deserted island in seemingly the middle of nowhere in a giant storm, even with other people. Action packed and well narrated!

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Rand Leeb-du Toit's avatar

Great feedback! Thanks Mark

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Nikki Spark's avatar

What a breathtaking chapter! I felt like I was in the boat, in the rain, anxious and scared for the characters. Very will they, won't they, what will happen next? Wow, so good. I love the captain's accent too!

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Rand Leeb-du Toit's avatar

Thanks Nikki!

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