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Nikki Spark's avatar

I just love the different voices the narrator does, and that each chapter is like a tiny story in itself. Always some kind of action! You really feel for the characters and their plight. And I like that the women are portrayed well, not weak or silly at all. Wonderful chapter!

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Rand Leeb-du Toit's avatar

Thanks Nikki!

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Mark's avatar

Scary chapter! I like the comic relief with the reference to the Tom Hanks movie. I also like that the men are all a little different, and the voices show that difference. I'm scared for Lucas's injury, considering he's a writer. I like that this chapter wasn't too pathetic. Stranded on a deserted island can go only a few ways in a book, and this version was done very well. Nicely done!

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Rand Leeb-du Toit's avatar

Thanks for the feedback, Mark

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